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 ## Atomic Swaps
 
-So our client has 1 `StackerNewsDemo-1` token in their wallet (which for our purposes is our pretend airline mile token) and he wants to exchange that for L-BTC. How do we do that?
+Atomic Swaps allow two parties to exchange different tokens without the need for a 3rd party, eliminating most of the risk of fraud or ounterparty default.
 
-Obviously, we could build some type of webservice that had SQL databases and nodejs files that accept Asset A and then issued Asset B once received...however as we said our StackerNews crew is smart and therefore prefers to do *less hardwork*
+In this case, our Customer has earned 1 SND token (which for our purposes is our pretend airline mile token) via previous purchases and he wants to exchange that for L-BTC. How do we do that?
 
-Luckily, due to the additional OPCODEs in Liquid, it supports atomic swaps between assets. In fact, Blockstream has a tool to simplify using it (obviously the steps we do here manually with the tool would be automated within the server / client in production).
+We could build some type of webservice that had SQL databases and nodejs files that accept Asset A and then issued Asset B once received...however as we said our StackerNews crew is smart and therefore prefers to do *less hardwork*. Moreover all of the above lends itself to risk of fraud and counterparty default.
 
-Obviously to do a swap, we will need another wallet, as you can't swap between the same wallet (you can refer to individual wallets in the swap-tool URL connect string by using the `http://user:password@localhost:7041/wallet/walletname` path)
+Luckily, due to the additional OPCODEs in Liquid, atomic swaps between assets are possible. In fact, Blockstream has a tool to simplify using it.
 
-In my case, I have 2 nodes each running `elementsd` server (Umbrel and another). So I will use that, but point is this can be done one a single node by setting up mutliple wallets and using distinct URL connect strings.
+Obviously to do a swap, we will need another wallet, as you can't swap between the same wallet (you can use the *same node* but use *different wallets*. You can refer to individual wallets in the swap-tool URL connect string by using the `http://user:password@localhost:7041/wallet/walletname` path). In my case, I have 2 nodes each running their own `elementsd` server (Umbrel and my desktop). So I will use those, but point is this can be done one a single node by setting up mutliple wallets and using distinct URL connect strings.
 
 Before we start, let's look at state of our 2 wallets:
 
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Before we start, let's look at state of our 2 wallets:
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-For our example, we can assume that StackerNews Airline (Node 1) is willing to accept a SND-1 token and return to the client 23,000 sats (approx $1 USD currently). So Node1 makes the following proposal
+For our example, we can assume that StackerNews Airline (Node 1) is willing to accept a SND token and return to the client 23,000 sats (approx $1 USD currently). So Node1 makes the following proposal
 
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 # StackerNews Airline, Inc.
@@ -100,12 +100,14 @@ Now lets review the state our wallets post swap:
 
 ## Securities / Transfer Restricted / etc
 
-# Pegging Out
-
-# Discussion
-
 ## Lightning Integration
 
+What if you have no desire to create tokens, securities, etc...can you still make use of Liquid? 
+
+Yes, probably one of the best ways to do that is to use it as a *staging area* for opening Lightning channels. In fact, both Blockstream Green and the newly announced (more user friendly) AQUA both do that under-the-hood.
+
+One of the main 
+
 ## Using Liquid with BTC / LN 
 
 ### Comparing eCash / Lightning / Liquid / BTC
@@ -124,7 +126,11 @@ Now lets review the state our wallets post swap:
 |Likely Threat:| Debasement or Mint rug | Theft of funds while offline | Federation censorship | Losing keys / unspendable UTXO for fees
 |Maturity: | 2023-2024 | 2018 | 2018 | 2009
 
-
-
 ## Building Your Own Federation
 
+## Pegging Out
+
+# Final Discussion and Ideas
+
+
+